Silence
A silence when you open the door
And cross a path you’ve crossed before.
We all see that look in you’re eyes
I know that look, it’s fulfilled with lies.
You'll never know I would have given you all
But you are just you, selfish
So I removed you’re picture from the wall.
Now you're gone and you've left me cold
So many people who had told
Not to give and not to care
I needed help you said, omg you dare.
A silence when you close the door
You know you’re lies don’t work out now, anymore.
They're all staring at you,
They know the truth.
Paths you’ve crossed are forever gone.
Silence.
Reacties op ‘Silence’
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prachtig.. echt waar! je kan kapot goede engelse gedichten schrijven xxx*geeft 5sterren*
CookiesMunchEather - 27-09-2011 om 16:01
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Heel mooi geschreven! Als ik kon zou ik je meer als 5 sterren geven! &merci voor je reacties ! Liefs
TheyCallMeMelissa - 09-06-2012 om 15:14
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Wow echt heel mooi gedicht!!
Linda - 09-09-2012 om 15:09
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AWESOME gedicht!!! ik ben echt fan van mensen die engelse gedichten schrijven en dit is echt Super goed. Zekers 5 sterren van mij Groetjes: Simon-Sleepzz
sleepzz - 20-09-2012 om 15:43
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Thnx a lot simon^^
Kelsey - 21-09-2012 om 23:17
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heel mooi ! je schrijft goed , liefs & 5 sterretjes
Lies - 01-11-2012 om 23:23
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A silence when you open the door And cross a path you’ve crossed before. (of you've been crossing, maar 've crossed is beter ) We all see that look in you’re eyes I know that look It’s fulfilled with lies. You'll never know I would have given you all But you are just you, selfish So I removed you’re picture from the wall. Now you're gone and you've left me cold So many people who had told Not to give and not to care I needed help you said, omg you dare. A silence when you close the door You know you’re lies don’t work out now, anymore. They're all staring at you, they know the truth. Paths you’ve crossed are forever gone. Silence. Ik zag wat fouten, dus ik verbeter het even voor je, wel goede gedichten Kelsey! x Romee
Romee - 14-12-2012 om 19:03
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Dankje TTO'er haha! Ik ga het verbeteren
Kelsey - 14-12-2012 om 21:27
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WAUW! echt waar super mooii!! xx
Rozi - 16-12-2012 om 12:52