Gedichten check: Titel??
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Patros-Fibros Berichten: 4.572 |
You've broken my heart, You've teared me down. You've wrecked my soul, You've gave me sorrow, And in that tears, You've let me drown. Forever I am broken, Forever I will drown. Forever I have sorrow, Forever I have pain, And for all I have done for you, Forever I am teared down. By the name of God, By the name of Allah, By the name of Jehova, By the name of whoever is there more. By the name of my Lord, Where did you do it for? Years you wanted me to bully, Years you wanted me for pain. Years you wanted me for swearing on, Years you wanted me to feel better, Because I was teared down, Years you didn't saw my tears in the rain. I've never had love, I've never had peace. I've never been happy, I've never been OK. Because of you, I've never had the change, To be myself. I've never been proud, Of my whole fucking life. I've always had the thought, About the rope or the knife. I've never felt being loved, That some one cared of me. I've always fought for you god damn! My friends, my family, my love. I've never been proud of myself, But I had to be proud. Accept me, you never can change me, I am perfect just the way I am. |
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Verwijderde gebruiker Berichten: 4562 |
Wauw .. Het is echt heel mooi Patros. Ik kan er moeilijk iets over zeggen Maar een titel .. Drowned ? x |
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Verwijderde gebruiker Berichten: 1657 |
Prachtig gedicht, Patros! Broken, |
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Valab Berichten: 210 |
Mooi maar ik weet echt geen titel. |
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Ichigo Berichten: 349 |
Mooi gedicht! Misschien 'Forced to fight'? |
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