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Gedichten check: Plaatsen?
 06-08-13 12:25startpost
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Zou ik dit plaatsen? Ik weet niet of er fouten inzitten ... I’m looking to you’r photo, And i write ‘I still love you’ on it, But today i am sad, I’m crying a little bit, My tears are real, And i got a reason, I though you love me, In this sunny season, We were in love, And i still love you, My heart belong to you, We have the same bracelet, On my bracelet, Is the first letter of you’r name, And your bracelet, Your bracelet is the same, When my hope flew away, I’m waiting, Waiting till you say, ‘I am sorry, i really love you’ And while i think about it, I see you comming, You take my hand, And i forgive you everything ... |
| 06-08-13 12:34 reactie 1
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Hij is super mooi. Zaten alleen een paar kleine foutjes in.. Ik hoop dat ik alle foutjes eruit heb gehaald, ik kan ook iets over het hoofd gezien hebben. Maar super gedaan! I’m looking to your photo, And I write ‘I still love you’ on it, But today I am sad, I’m crying a little bit, My tears are real, And I got a reason, I though you loved me, In this sunny season, We were in love, And I still love you, My heart belong to you, We have the same bracelet, On my bracelet, Is the first letter of your name, And your bracelet, Your bracelet is the same, When my hope flew away, I’m waiting, Waiting till you say, ‘I’m sorry, I really love you’ And while I think about it, I see you coming, You take my hand, And I forgive you everything... |
| 06-08-13 12:35 reactie 2
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Hardboy Berichten: 930 |
I’m looking to you’r photo, = I'm looking at your photo. And i write ‘I still love you’ on it, = And I write ‘I still love you’ on it, But today i am sad, = But today I am sad, alle IK dus ( I ) Moet met een hoofdletter  |
| 06-08-13 12:43 reactie 3
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Ow, oke, thanxx allebei  |
| 06-08-13 12:47 reactie 4
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Patros-Fibros Berichten: 4572 |
Met fouten: super Zonder: geweldig |
| 06-08-13 13:46 reactie 5
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Autisme Berichten: 221 |
Plaatsen maar zou wel de foutjes eruit halen. Dankjewel hardboy want idd alle "IK,s" moeten een "I" zijn  Groetjes |
| 06-08-13 15:48 reactie 6
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Suusie Berichten: 405 |
idd super! En het moet zijn: I thought you loved me in plaats van i though you loved me en: my heart belongs to you met een s erbij dus:p die fouten zijn niet zo erg want het gedicht is wel heel mooi xxx |
| 06-08-13 16:10 reactie 7
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wil je : I really love you accentueren dan zet je I do really love you |
| 06-08-13 16:11 reactie 8
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Bedankt Leon, maar hebhet net ingezonen, ga het nu niet veranderen. Even doortypen aan m'n verhaal over Bell |
| 11-08-13 11:05 reactie 9
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Supermooi gedicht die fouten maken mij niks uit! |
| 19-08-13 20:32 reactie 10
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Thnx bffje !!! |
| 22-08-13 10:35 reactie 11
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No Problem. When I look into your eyes, it's like watching the night sky Or a beautiful sunrise, well there's so much they hold And just like them old stars, I see that you've come so far To be right where you are, how old is your soul I won't give up on us, even if the skies get rough I'm giving you all my love, I'm still looking up And when you're needing your space, to do some navigating I'll be here patiently waiting, to see what you find 'Cause even the stars they burn Some even fall to the earth We've got a lot to learn God knows we're worth it No, I won't give up I don't wanna be someone who walks away so easily I'm here to stay and make the difference that I can make Our differences they do a lot to teach us How to use the tools and gifts, we got, yeah, we got a lot at stake And in the end, you're still my friend at least we did intend For us to work we didn't break, we didn't burn We had to learn, how to bend, without the world, caving in I had to learn what I got, and what I'm not and who I am I won't give up on us, even if the skies get rough I'm giving you all my love, I'm still looking up, I'm still looking up I won't give up on us, God knows I'm tough enough We got a lot to learn, God knows we're worth it I won't give up on us, even if the skies get rough I'm giving you all my love, I'm still looking up |
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