Gedichten check: I never thought
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Stoplight flashes red Highway up ahead And I'm travelling I'm coming home to you And I'm smiling just like Mr Moon 'Cause seeing your happy face Makes me warm in all the places That I can't say - it's rude... And I've never loved anyone like you I never thought I'd find the kind of love you read in classic stories If I am Miss Elizabeth Then you're the charming Mr. Darcey And life's a tea party with you Turnpike's up ahead Not much longer 'til my exit Heart's racing like this car And my eyes they are twinkling like the stars I never thought I'd chance the kind of romance that'd taste so sweet If you are like the rocky road Then I am like the chocolate ice-cream We go together so nicely Traffic jam is so alarming! But the thought of you's disarming Any road rage That I might fly into And the radio's playing Funky Beatles tunes I never thought I'd find the kind of love that they express in love songs And Lennon and McCartney said it rightly That you can't buy love And you're my diamond in the rough Coming home Coming home to you Is the best thing that anyone could ever hope to do... |
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Verwijderde gebruiker Berichten: 904 |
Lichtelijk geforceerde rijm, toch bewondering. In het Engels dichten is niet simpel. |
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writer Berichten: 39 |
@Roosjee Nog tips dan? |
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Verwijderde gebruiker Berichten: 904 |
Ik zou je graag tips willen geven, maar ik heb geen ervaring met woordspelingen, rijmschema's en dergelijke in het Engels. |
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writer Berichten: 39 |
Njaa Toch bedankt!!! |
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