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Gedichten check: Rain that washes away
 13-04-11 21:50startpost
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As my sadness overcomes me I look out the window And see the rain falling Running outside into rain while hoping it will free me of my stain The rain slowly drips down my face Washing away my stain The hallowed rain falls unto my hands The stain echoed trough my heart I watch and feel the rain While trying to clear my thoughts And hoping of course That it will wash away the stain While soaking wet and lost in thoughts The rain slowly stops I notice this and open my eyes, breathing deeply Now i'm ready to start anew  commentaar op prijs gesteld(spelfouten/rare zinnen, ect)mijn tweede gedicht in het engels, >< best nog moeilijk in een andere taal edit: aan iemand die goed engels kan laten lezen en verbetert |
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