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 07-12-10 21:23startpost
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Indien het de eerste keer niet helemaal doordringt, gelieve de tijd te nemen het nog eens te lezen.. Ik zou graag weten wat jullie ervan vinden.. Alvast bedankt voor de tijd en moeite ______________________ Alone in the house Happy to be The tears rolling down For no one to see The feeling of hunger As a far away past The beat of my heart Keeps going too fast Don't know what to ask And scared to say Questions build up Please take them away Want back to the past Time laughs in my face Memories hurt But don't want to erase I want you back Just like before You and me Nothing more Don't worry, don't cry My words of the day Lunch time - PM All washed away So thankful to know you Blessed to have met Location cloud nine Will never forget My little baby girl My sunshine far away I miss you so much Every night and every day Your name a warm feeling Made room for deep pain Wish I could tell you How I'm going insane But don't want you to worry Don't want you to see Don't want you to know What it's doing to me But the space you want The time you need I respect your choice Want you to succeed Just give me some hope, A word, a small sign Don't want to give up Want you to be mine Wish loving someone Was enough to be Together forever It's the truth I now see My little princess Wish my future was planned Please come back in my life Please hold out your hand...... |
| 08-12-10 21:41 reactie 1
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Ichigo Berichten: 349 |
Wow  , serieus respect...Echt super mooi gemaakt... Gaat t over jezelf...? grtz |
| 08-12-10 23:59 reactie 2
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Het Ichigo, Het gaat inderdaad jammer genoeg over mezelf.. Kheb het eerste stukje geschreven toen alles een beetje fout begon te lopen en het midden en laatste stukje toen het gedaan was.. Bedankt voor je commentaar :-) |
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